You have loads of potential Gerrie, I just think that you need to enunciate your vocals better. Find a balance between the tone you’re after and the vocal sounding natural. Check the video on YouTube for my full commentary. Gerrie studies at COPA Music School. Audition recorded at The Cooler recording studio.
This song/video has a goosebumps moment for me. Danny kicks his voice into high gear at 2m15s then hits the limit of his range at around 2m34s. The goosebumps come on the very next note when his voice takes on that rasping, rock edge. See full commentary in the video description on YouTube.
I love the lyrics, the voice and the guitar. Thanks Matt, see ya…no, I have to say something more… See full commentary in the video description on YouTube. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC8hXnvLZo1zfQGHZqyWWs9g www.facebook.com/clubofsuns/ Recorded at www.thecooler.co.za
#SongsmithsSA This is my work, hope you like it 🙂 ..The Dilemma & Everything has Changed Posted by K-Jo on Friday, 25 August 2017 K-Jo’s song, The Dilemma, is mesmerizing. The vocals are beautiful and it’s nice that the lyrics don’t fall into a predictable rhyming structure. That’s not easy to do.
I dig the vocal and performance aspects of Bruce’s audition and I think this could be a really cool song after a bit of tweaking. Well done and thank you Bruce. For more details, view the video description on YouTube. Recorded at The Cooler.
Watch In My Zone Video Thanks for your entry Monique. You have a lovely voice and sing well. In the guitar-and-voice format there isn’t much of a distinction between verse and chorus, but that would change in production with the addition of more instruments and voices. I actually like repetitive chord sequences like this. They […]
I love the tone of your voice and you use it well. Given the dark theme, I think the song should have a hard rock edge and the vivid imagery would lend itself well to a movie or tv soundtrack.
Young Hayley turned in a great song and a magnetic performance . I can’t wait to see where this 14-year-old goes from here. Thank you so much for sharing your song Hayley. Read full commentary in the video description on YouTube.
Matt Levings from Club of Suns was in studio yesterday to record a rocking Songsmiths audition. Very happy to have his and 2 more awesome vids in the queue, but we need more! All songwriters are welcome and the more participation we get, the better the platform will work for you.
Rocker Jaco is the first Songsmith to record his audition in our Joburg studio (for free!). Thanks, congratulations and well done Jaco! Please check the video description on YouTube for my commentary.